TWISTED TORMENTS

by FireCracker (KLee624820@aol.com)



submission dated 8-29-99

Pairing Q/O

Archive OK

A/U - Kink/first time!

Rating: A really naughty R

Obi's been unhappy. He needs attention.



Obi-Wan had no idea what he was getting himself into. When Qui-Gon requested they go on a little 'excursion' after a relatively non-eventful diplomatic peace mission, he just assumed it meant they would do some exploring in the abandoned mining areas. They had discussed visiting the place before, so he had presumed this was the opportunity.

He was so wrong.

Things were going well between them, as usual. But there was an underlying tension in the last few months, and he knew the cause. Why did I have to tell him how I really felt? He remembered all but throwing himself at his Master. The heated argument they had about the Code was only confusing. Qui-Gon did kiss him back. It was a sweet sensation he hadn't been able to shake from memory.

Why did he pull back? He wants me with equal fire, I can feel it.

Defying the Code was no small matter. Obi-Wan would do nothing to jeopardize his Masters' status among the Jedi. But the feeling, the craving was as intense as ever. Ever since that day Qui-Gon was either close or distant, and it was driving him crazy. It's almost as if he thinks I'm delicate and will break.

They didn't speak of it in all that time, the argument. Too much was said, and too much left untouched. I have to find a way to breach this. I want him so badly.



The opportunity never arose. Over the next few months, driven by frustration, Obi-Wan decided to see people and date. He remembered the situation with Debrith, a fellow padawan. She had always liked Obi-Wan, and was delighted when they began seeing one another.

It turned into a disaster the night they decided to become intimate. Jebrith was lovely and willing, and they had a nice time. Her red ringlets were tousled, her gray eyes bright. She kissed him in his sleep. Then it happened.

He reached out, murmuring. "Qui-Gon, beloved." Debrith jolted back in shock.

Obi-Wan continued in his dream-state, stroking her hair. "Love you forever. Hold me..."

"No!"

Slowly, his eyes opened. He stared mutely at Debrith, horrified. He'd blown it.

Tears stung behind her eyes. "Qui-Gon! You're in bed with me and you cry for your Master!"

He tried to stop her. "No, I didn't mean it, please..."

"Get OUT! You disgust me!" she indicated the door, leaving the bed abruptly.

He slumped, looking at his hands. There was nothing he could say.

After that he received only cold glares from her. The one time she spoke the message was crystal clear.

"Pray that I don't report your perversion to the Council."



He knew her words wouldn't be taken as proof. But there were already enough suspicions about the temple that didn't need added fuel.

His other relationship didn't fare much better. A brief fling with another padawan, Renee, whom he hadn't seen since they were children. A relationship of convenience, doomed from the start.

This isn't working, I know what I want. Qui-Gon! his heart shouted in pain. Ghods, I'm dying inside...

Qui-Gon had a good sense of the emotional pain and anguish his padawan was enduring. I know the Code, but Force, I want him! It seemed even the control of a Master wasn't enough.

If I could tell you what I feel, show you...

His eyes lit with a mad plan. Dangerous, and possibly ruinous, but he could't go on this way.

Force forgive my madness, but I can't take it anymore. I must be with my love in any way fate allows.






Obi-Wan's mind returned to the present. He still couldn't figure out where they were going on this 'excursion.' Qui-Gon had been secretive, almost...sly.

"So, padawan, you seem distracted."

Obi-Wan scratched his head. "Master, what are we doing? We've wandered about the city, roamed the nearby forest. I don't understand."

A small smile. "I wanted your mind off of the temple and it's affairs. This is our time."

Obi-Wan stared, befuddled. "Yes, but what are we doing?"

Qui-Gon looked around in the secluded grove where they stood. He took Obi-Wan's hands in his own, massaging them gently.

"What is your heart's wish, padawan?" he asked softly, eyes glowing with promise.

Obi-Wan's eyes grew wide with dawning comprehension. Wild hope made his pulse thump.

"Master...are-are you saying that we.."

Qui-Gon leaned forward, giving him a soft kiss.

"There is a cottage not too far from here" he smiled, "and if you like we can continue this."

Obi-Wan's breathing quickened. "Oh-oh, yes!" he was delighted.

"Come" he drew the younger man along, pulling him by the hand. Obi-Wan followed blindly, his body flushed with desire.

The cottage was up a sunny hill with a few sparse trees about. A small lake was a mile off.

It could have been a flat rock as far as Obi-Wan was concerned. As long as Qui-Gon is sprawled on it.

They had barely gotten inside when Obi-Wan spun the taller man against the door, pinning him with a fierce kiss. His hands frantically roamed the long form.

Qui-Gon returned the kiss with equal intensity before pulling off a little.

"Patience, padawan. Not all at once. I have a request of thee."

Obi-Wan was gasping. "No more patience! Must we talk at all? I want you!"

Qui-Gon gave him another firm kiss, then pulled off again. "There are are so many things I wanted to do with you-"

"Qui-Gon, please..."

The taller man held him tighter. "So many things I want to do to you..." the eyes darkened with lust.

"Just do it!" Obi-Wan clutched him, voice hoarse with need.

Qui-Gon's lips curled into a feral smile. "Then, I want you to be my love slave. You will wear what I tell you. You will do what I command."

The younger man buried his face in Qui-Gon's neck. "I'm already a slave to love. Want you so much it hurts."

Qui-Gon led him to the bed. He sprawled out on his back.

"Undress me" he commanded.

Obi-Wan could barely contain his excitement. His hands trembled in anticipation. "Yes, master, gladly."

As he undid bindings, tunic, and pants, Obi-Wan noticed Qui-Gon wore something slippery underneath. Also something hard. His breathing came heavily.

"What's this?" husky whisper. Qui-Gon lay on the mattress passively, watching him.

In amazement, he stared at the sight. Qui-Gon wore dark blue latex pants, matching armhole mesh half-top, and gold nipple rings. The garb accented the muscular frame. The wild mane tumbling down his back. Obi-Wan stood back, staring. Qui-Gon smiled warmly.

"Like it, padawan?"

Obi-Wan massaged the firm stomach. "Master, you are kinky and positively gorgeous."

The night blue eyes narrowed. "Now you undress."

Obi-Wan complied quickly. Soon he stood at the bedstand in all his glory. His cock began to throb.

Qui-Gon slid off the bed. Grabbing Obi-Wan's padawan braid, he pulled him over to the dresser. With his other hand, he pulled out a sash, a small bottle of oil, and handcuffs.

Obi-Wan looked at him in surprise but said nothing. He started to question, but Qui-Gon smashed his lips in another quelling kiss. The younger man groaned from the attention and his penis began to swell and rise. Qui-Gon turned him away and tied the sash over his eyes.

"Master" Obi-Wan panted. "I want-"

"Silence. Do as I say" the taller man led him to the bed. He pushed the other man face down on the mattress. He attached a short chain on the handcuffs for greater range.

"Give me your hands."

Silently, Obi-Wan obeyed. Qui-Gon placed a cuff on each wrist, attaching them to the bedpost.

Large hands traced down the bronzed body, stroking, teasing. The oil was warm. Qui-Gon spread it generously into every crevice, over every inch. Obi-Wan groaned again. "Please-" wiggled hips.

A slap. "Did I instruct you to move?"

"No, Master."

"Then be still." The larger man straddled across his backside without penetrating. He rubbed his cock between Obi-Wan's cheeks, moving sensuously side to side.

"Like that?"



"I want you!" Obi-Wan shouted. "I'm going to-"

Qui-Gon sensed his impending orgasm. His hand snaked low, under and between legs-

and gripped the base of Obi-Wan's cock, preventing release. He yelped in pain. His face fell down in the pillows, rasping for air.

"Not yet, my Obi-Wan. Too soon" He oiled his hand. One finger slid up the warm channel. Two. Three. Four! Obi-Wan nearly screamed, lifting up, bucking and humping the twisting fist. His cock bobbed underneath his body.

"YoulikethiswhenIdothistoyouyes!" Qui-Gon rumbled, hoarse with lust. "You want me to bang until you come-"

"Yes, YES, do me, Master!" Obi-Wan was spun out of control. Qui-Gon abruptly removed his hand, almost sending his lover over the edge. He grabbed the swollen cock and yanked on it. Again, it softened a little. Obi-Wan whimpered.

"I wanted it, no..."

Qui-Gon's own control was fading. He flipped the younger man over on his back, spreading his legs wide, lifting them a bit. He leaned forward, rolling his head across the oiled body, tickling it with his overlong mane. He massaged and pinched the plump nipples, stroking his hair across them. Obi-Wan writhed and moaned loudly.



Going lower again, he slapped Obi-Wan's balls repeatedly, feeling them stiffen from the stimulation. He paddled the fat nipples, seeing them rise and redden.

"Ghods, Qui-Gon, DON'T STOP!" He arched high, legs flown wild, up in the air. His cock waggled, straining.

Quickly, Qui-Gon plunged and pulled his mouth on the velvet head until he tasted the pre-cum. It was time. He was about to explode himself. With one thrust, he was inside his lover, pumping him with piston-like precision. The muscles in his back flexed, sweat splattered from him onto Obi-Wan's chest. His lover's lush buttocks shook from the pounding.

"I'm coming, Master, I'm coming...YES!!" Obi-Wan shrieked, his body vibrating, shooting a stream in the air that splattered on Qui-Gon.

With a coarse cry, Qui-Gon shuddered and came, filling Obi-Wan's channel. He collapsed on his lover. They lay trembling, waiting for their bodies and minds to calm.

Slowly, Qui-Gon reached up, removing the handcuffs and untying the blindfold from Obi-Wan's face. He blinked, dazed and unfocused.

"Oh. That was so wonderful, my master" he said softly, snuggling into Qui-Gon's neck. "Love you."

Qui-Gon returned the embrace, holding him tightly. "And I love thee with all my heart. I wanted our first time together to be memorable."

Obi-Wan looked into his eyes drowsily, stroking the short beard. "Like a dream."

Qui-Gon pulled the covers over them both. "A reality now, my love" he joined his lover in sleep.



THE END



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