The Rapunzel Syndrome

by Keelywolfe



Rating: PG

Feedback: Sure

Disclaimer: I don't own the following characters and I promise to put them back in nearly the same condition that I found them in. Nearly.

Archive: Master and Apprentices, sure. Anyone else, just ask, I'm pretty flexible

Authors note: I actually considered making this NC-17, but well, I'm already writing another one, this is just a little pwp.



Tel'har was a beautiful planet, lush vegetation, temperate climate. What many species might consider their version of heaven. And Obi-Wan Kenobi decided he had seen enough of it in three days to last him the rest of eternity. For one, any comparison to paradise would fade when the torrential nightly rains came. And secondly, those same rains caused huge mud pits in the jungles. Particularly sticky, clinging mud pits that Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon managed to discover on their own.

Obi-Wan had already cleaned his body and now he was working on his lightsaber. It was well made and designed to work in the harshest of environments, but there were limits.

He paused when his master walked into the room, fresh from the shower. He nodded at his apprentice before settling in front of the room monitor to read the daily reports. He watched Qui-Gon start combing the mass of tangles from his hair. The mud had been especially viscous and difficult to wash out and several vigorous scrubbings had no doubt been necessary. The older man was fairly jerking the comb through his hair and Obi-Wan winced in sympathetic pain. Surely he didn't need to be so rough. But he was distracted with his reading and it was harder to remove tangles that you couldn't see. An idea formed in the back of Obi-Wan's mind. Did he dare?

Watching his master struggle with a particular stubborn snarl decided it for him. He walked over and, somewhat hesitantly, confiscated the comb. Qui-Gon glanced up questioningly for a moment, but then resumed his reading without comment. Permission granted, Obi-Wan carefully worked out the knot, starting from the ends and working his way up. The heavy mass was still damp and felt cool and soft against his fingers. From the time he'd been apprenticed to Qui-Gon he'd always secretly admire Qui-Gon's hair. Even as a child he'd been forced to wear his own hair short and now as a Padawan he was allowed only a short pigtail and a braid. And so the long strands of his master's hair fascinated him.

Not that Qui-Gon was particularly vain about it. He wore it simply, tied back and away from his face so as not to obscure his vision. He'd probably only let it grow because as a master he could. The older man flinched slightly as the comb caught at yet another tangle and Obi-Wan massaged the spot with his free hand, soothing away the pain he had inadvertently caused.

The thick length lightened as it dried, turning a rich bronze streaked lightly with gray, betraying his master's age. The tangles were gone now, but Obi-Wan continued, running the comb downward and smoothing it with his other hand. Qui-Gon had long since abandoned his reading and instead was resting his head on his hands, eyes closed as he relaxed into the pleasant sensation.

The long strands were silky against his fingers, clinging to them statically. He ran his hand down its length again, to feel the texture of it against his palm. He suddenly felt an overwhelming urge to bury his face into those satiny tresses and inhale deeply, to breathe in that clean scent and feel that softness against his face.

He nearly recoiled in horror at the fleeting thought. Where had -that- come from? Sure, Master Qui-Gon had nice hair but really, what a most improper action that would be. Even as he pondered it, his hands never faltered, still stroked that wonderfully silky mass. Another thought slipped in, replacing the first. He knew how soft it felt against his hands, the clinging filaments almost ticklish. How would it feel elsewhere? On his chest perhaps? His stomach, his...

Qui-Gon made a soft noise and Obi-Wan dropped the comb, terrified that his inappropriate thoughts had been discovered. But his master said nothing and upon closer inspection, Obi-Wan realized with a touch of pique that the older man was asleep.

The flash of annoyance fled as quickly as it had come. Of course he was tired, neither of them had slept more than a handful of hours in the past few days. If he had any sense of his own he'd be tired too.

He stepped back and with careful concentration he used the Force, with careful delicacy, to shift his master into the bed. The other man never stirred, a testament to his trust in his student. Obi-Wan swore to himself that he would never betray that trust. He quickly slipped into his sleeping clothes before settling on the bed with his master and when he rested his head in the pillow, he could feel the very fringe of that soft weight brush his cheek, faintly smelled the fresh cleanliness of it.

Sleep was a long time coming.

End

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