The Essay

by kaly (razrbkr@juno.com)



Series: IS: Missing Moments #9

Rating: G

Archive: m_a

Classification: short story, series story

Warnings: AU (compared to JA), knowledge of Inner Strength series will help.

Spoilers: vague mentions of event in IS3: Inner Struggle and IS4: Inner Spark

Summary: Elyzabe give Obi-Wan's class a writing assignment.

Feedback: The feedback y'all have sent me over the past few months is what helped resurrect this series. I would love to know if you like this one too.

Notes: It's baaack. Um, if my little Obi-Wan stories were never your thing, run away - far away. And for all of you who've emailed, asked, and even begged (your words not mine *g*) this is for y'all. I hope you enjoy it.

Thank Yous: Yet another story brought to you by the letter K. Thanks Krychick, Keely and Kristi for look at this for me!

Disclaimer: since it looks like lucas refuses to give us stories about obi and qui before the movie, other than the far too few JA series, (but full length novels about obi and ani? sigh.) i'll have to do it myself :)



Master Kohn looked out across the classroom. The lesson that was planned for the afternoon had ended far earlier than expected. Glancing at the children, she knew there could only be trouble if they were given too much free time before dismissal.

Smiling, she considered her options for a moment. The children were all looking at her, expectantly, when she moved toward a large cabinet in the far corner.

Unlocking the door, she reached inside and pulled out a stack of paper - real paper, rather than the padds that were often used - and the appropriate number of pencils. After making sure she had gathered everything they would need, she closed the cabinet.

"Today, each of us is going to write about something."

She managed to hide her smile while watching their reactions. Even though they were only children, they had already had enough training to know better than actually groan in response.

Walking around the room, she handed each child a piece of the paper and a pencil. After the task was done, she returned to the front of the room. In her hands, she held a piece of paper and a pencil for herself. Years of teaching had taught her a few things as well. Such as it is often easier to lead by example, when the students would rather be doing anything but what was required of them.

Leaning back onto the sturdy frame of her desk, she smiled brightly at the students. "Do any of you have an idea what we should write about?"

She watched the flickers of surprise on their faces at being presented with the option. There was a long moment of silence before one of the students sitting toward the back raised her hand.

"Yes, Chelle?" she asked the small Andriaan.

Chelle smiled. "What if we wrote about our familes, back home?"

Elyzabe's smile didn't falter, but she immediately rejected the suggestion mentally. More than one of those she taught either had no memory of home, or had those they might rather forget. Her eyes turned to one red-gold head in particular.

Only months before she had known very little beyond the official report detailing the circumstances that brought Obi-Wan Kenobi to the Temple. However, since then, Qui-Gon had shared with her some of what he learned from the child himself about his past. Her heart tightened at the images the words created.

The thoughts lasted only seconds and she shook her head. She tried to smile to cushion the denial. "I'm sorry, Chelle. Some of your classmates were brought to the Temple when they were too young to remember their homes." Kohn refrained from mentioning her other concern to the young children.

"Another idea?" Another hand was raised, a boy this time. She turned her attention toward him. "Yes Ray?"

He smiled, faintly. "Might we write about what we'd like to be when we grow up?"

Elyzabe laughed brightly. "And what would you like to be, young Ray? Maybe a Jedi?" Her voice was warm, emphaising that she wasn't making fun of the child's suggestion.

Ray grinned, glancing around at his classmates who joined in the laughter. "I guess that's what all of us would want to be. Right, Master Kohn?"

She nodded. "I think so, although one or two of you might try and surprise me. A good suggestion, Ray, but not quite what I had in mind."

"I tried," he said with a smile.

Glancing across the smiling faces, she waited for another to raise their hand. When none did right away, she looked at Obi-Wan. While not as shy as he had been in the past, he was yet to be eager to speak up in class.

Elyzabe tilted her head to the side, it did look as if he might have a suggestion. "Do you have an idea, Obi-Wan?"

His green eyes widened as he stared at his teacher. She watched as he swallowed nervously. "I think so, Master Kohn."

"What do you think we should write about?"

Obi-Wan smiled, the corners of his mouth just barely turning upward. He looked a bit nervous, but spoke anyway. "Could we write about our best friend?"

Elyzabe nodded in agreement. She spoke while walking back around her desk. "I think that would be a wonderful thing to write about, Obi-Wan." Sitting down, she placed her paper and pencil before her.

Picking up her pencil, she waited for her students to do the same. "Be sure to write your names on your work." She thought for a moment, and knew that the grin on her face would probably worry grown Masters. Luckily, for her, the children were still too young to realize it typically meant trouble. "Perhaps we will share our papers with the people we write about."

There was a mixed reaction to her comment, but she was pleased by the overall response. Her smile didn't face, but her tone was firm, broking no argument. "However, I know that you will all be serious when writing." She added the last, just in case, even though she doubted it was necessary.

Within moments, all of the small heads were hunched over their desks, busily writing. She watched for a moment, before thinking about what she might write herself.

At his desk, Obi-Wan stared at the empty paper for a moment. He had thought of the idea, but suddenly he wasn't sure what to write. His hesistation only lasted a moment when he thought about his best friend, and smiled. Pencil in hand, he began to write, quickly, but as neatly as possible, about his best friend.




My Best Friend
by Obi-Wan Kenobi

Not very long ago, I didn't have a best friend. I mean, I had friends from class, but not a real best friend like you hear stories about. Then one night I had a bad dream about my mom and brother. I was really sad and tried to hide. My best friend found me. That's how I met my best friend, Master Qui-Gon.

He made me feel better, let me cry and everything, even though I thought I was too old to cry anymore. I don't think he had been around little kids much, but he was still nice to me. It's kind of weird, we have a bond, that's what Master Qui-Gon calls it. I can sorta feel what he feels.

A little while ago I got sick. I think it was bad, and Master Kohn was scared. I think it was some kind of flu. I felt all alone, but Master Qui-Gon found me. I can't really say what it was like. Kinda like being out in the rainstorms we had back home. When I woke up I was really happy to see him, even if he snores really loud.

The healers kept me in that boring white room for ages. I was so bored. I think I must have been bothering the healers. I didn't want to just sit there, I wanted to do stuff. Like play with some of my friends. Master Qui-Gon tried to keep me busy, 'cause the healers wouldn't let my friends into my room. He tried to teach me to play some card game. I didn't ever understand it, but it was still a lot of fun.

He even took me on a trip when I got better. I got to meet Master Windu then. That was because we were stuck at the gardens, but Master Qui-Gon told me stories so I wouldn't be scared of the storms.

I think he's going to be my best friend for a very long time.




At the end of the learning period Master Kohn collected the essays and pencils back from the students as the followed Padawan Jonis from the classroom. After putting up the pencils, she carefully placed the papers into a carrysack and left the classroom.



End