Shower of Discovery

by Lyta Alexander, aka the Pink Padawan (pinkpadawan@yahoo.com)



Category: PWP, First Time, Angst, I guess...

Rating: Most decidedly NC-17!

Archive: M/A and whoever asks me nicely!

Summary: This is an unabashed sex scene with only the hint of plot, maybe not even that. I'll let it be a surprise! I will tell you that it was partially inspired by a particularly hot scene in Liam's movie "Under Suspicion".

Warnings: Lots of sex! (If that's what you are in the mood for, then this is for you!)



Steam filled the 'fresher chamber, billowing from the tiled shower, as the hot water beat down upon the two joined bodies. The young Jedi Knight was pressed forcefully into the wall under the water flow. The older Jedi took the hot spray as he thrust repeatedly into the young man's body.

Steam rose from Qui-Gon's streaming wet hair; liquid fire ran through his muscles. All of it poured into the young Knight, who shook with the force of the attack, his breath rushing out of him rhythmically. The young man's face lay sideways against the tiles; eyes half-lidded, mouth fallen open in a vain attempt to catch his breath.

Qui-Gon held him steady with tightly folded arms around the slim hips of the Knight. His hips anchored him as they both pushed and pulled at the gasping Knight. The water flowed down the smooth planes of Qui-Gon's back. The rhythm became faster and more staccato; Qui-Gon grunted viciously as he buried himself in the Young Knight's body. His teeth clenched with the force of his pounding;

Suddenly, the Knight's mouth fell wide open; his crystal blue eyes opened, and a long moan escaped, which rose to a scream as he lost control. Nerve shocks coursed through him; his breath came in harsh pants. He came against the tiles as he was pressed ferociously against them by Qui-Gon's spasming loins.

The young man's sphincter muscles tightened convulsively, mercilessly pulling Qui-Gon into him, shooting an irresistible wave of sudden pleasure through his formidable body. He swelled all at once, convulsing against the young man, pressing him tightly into the tiled wall as he slumped over the Knight's shoulder. The two shook violently as they pushed themselves against each other, opening to the sensations within them, falling away as the shaking overtook their bodies.

Cool air rushed in as Qui-Gon fell back against the shower wall, catching his breath, feeling the aftershocks of intense pleasure. Another pair of sharp blue-gray eyes bored into him, then lowered to regard the wet young man who lay in a heap at the front of the shower.

Obi-Wan couldn't believe his eyes. His own master had taken another to his shower and fucked him senseless, while Obi-Wan practiced forms and meditation with Master Yoda halfway across the Temple. The practice had been cut short, however, when Obi-Wan found he could not control his breathing. He had begged to be excused on the grounds that he was feeling ill.

As he had approached their suite, Obi-Wan had felt unaccountably aroused, so much so that he was forced to re-don his robe to hide the fact from the other masters and padawans who filed around him in the halls. By the time he had reached the door, he was breathing so raggedly that he became dizzy.

A helpful master had rushed to his aid as he began to fall against the wall. Obi-Wan had insisted he was all right, merely exhausted and without sleep. The master had helped him reach the door to his and Qui-Gon's quarters, but he apparently had not noticed the fog in his eyes, the tiny, electric shaking that coursed through him.

Obi-Wan practically fell through the door; he could feel everything his master felt. As he tore open the 'fresher door, he gasped at the sight before him. The desire spiked, but shocked anger accompanied it and the intense, rising feelings which he had experienced through his bond stopped short, trapped, becoming painful. He was witnessing his master in the aftermath of his loss of control in extreme passion. He grabbed at the shower latch to hold himself steady and found his master looking straight at him, his eyes glazed, skin flushed with desire.

Obi-Wan froze and stood staring at Qui-Gon, his mouth open, face red with confusion and the stirrings of anger. Neither of them moved, as the young Knight finally unfolded himself from the shower floor and raised his head. He had figured out what was happening through the fog of his consummated lust.

He rose shakily and rushed past Obi-Wan, dizzily finding his clothes in the main room. His long reddish hair stuck wetly to him, as he donned the clothing he had earlier thrown off with such abandon. He glanced briefly back into the 'fresher. The Knight decided his best move was to clear out, so he picked up his boots and walked quickly away, almost falling out the door to Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan's suite. He sat at the side of the hall and pulled his boots quickly on.

Obi-Wan didn't even bother to remove his clothes before he stepped into the shower to face Qui-Gon. The anger showed clear in his face, but arousal showed just as clearly. Obi-Wan had felt everything through his bond with his master, and it all showed in his eyes. The young man stood under the water, his tunics soaked thoroughly, his rampant, unsatisfied erection straining through the now-translucent pants.

Qui-Gon started to speak to him. "Obi-Wan..." That was all he managed before Obi-Wan set upon him. The padawan pushed forward with all his weight, swallowing Qui-Gon's mouth in one savage move. Obi-Wan ground himself against the mortified Jedi Master, as he pressed the larger man back.

Qui-Gon slammed into the wall, just as Obi-Wan came up for air. "You had another, Master. How could you do that? " Qui-Gon began to regain his balance as Obi-Wan continued. "I've wanted to do that with you for years, and yet you choose another." Obi-Wan's voice was breaking now, but he continued to press his master into the tiles with insistent thrusts.

Qui-Gon grabbed his soaked padawan and asserted his strength, pushing Obi-Wan back into the water flow, straightening himself. Obi-Wan stood staring at him, his teeth clenched, his chest heaving up and down with his unwitting arousal.

"Master, your little escapade did this to me, and now you have to fix it!" Obi-Wan nearly stamped his foot, but the sensations running through him made voluntary movement agonizing although somewhat pleasurable. Every touch of the warm spray of the shower was a shooting nerve of pain and pleasure to the unsatisfied padawan.

"Obi-Wan, you are my padawan. You know it is inappropriate for me to make these advances to you. " Qui-Gon had recovered his breath and stood holding his padawan steady as he spoke. "I would not take unfair advantage of you, even though I have also desired you above all for a long time."

Obi-Wan's jaw unclenched and he stared at his master, his jaw falling, his eyes softening slightly. "And that's why you take others, Knights..." Obi-Wan inclined his head towards the direction the Knight had disappeared. "Others who resemble me."

Qui-Gon stood back from his padawan, who gazed into his eyes with what could be called a mixture of relief and extreme arousal. Obi-Wan looked as if he had just been presented with the most sumptuous feast in the galaxy.

Slowly, the soaked padawan began to peel off his uniform; his lightsaber was now shorted, but he didn't seem to care. The belt fell off him; tunics and pants unstuck and were peeled away. Obi-Wan now stood naked as his master, his breaths quickening under the warm jets of water which caressed his trembling shoulders.

Qui-Gon laid his hands on Obi-Wan's shoulders and captured his eyes firmly. "You certain of this, Obi-Wan? This is what you want?"

Obi-Wan gasped out an almost petulant answer. "Master, if you don't take me, I shall be forced to set upon you like a wild animal. Please!"

With preternatural suddenness, the hands that had rested on Obi-Wan's shoulders were now around his hips. His master was kneeling before him, stroking his legs, reigniting the shooting sparks of pleasure that lay under the surface, bringing them out into full expression. Obi-Wan's legs shook under him, and he cried aloud when Qui-Gon finally teased his erection with his tongue.

The padawan's legs threatened to give out completely when Qui-Gon closed his mouth around his aching hardness, stroking it lightly with his tongue. His master was being very slow, very deliberate and it was too much for the young man.

Obi-Wan plunged his fingers into his master's hair, grabbing handfuls of it, clenching his hands as his body convulsed. His body's shaking became too great, and he collapsed to the shower floor, held firmly by Qui-Gon as he did.

As Qui-Gon laid Obi-Wan gently against the tiled wall, he recaptured the padawan's engorged member and took it full in his mouth. Obi-Wan felt sharp radiating pleasure, which dragged him under like the tides of a violent ocean. His head fell back and he panted wildly. Finally, unable to contain the pressing sensations, he screamed and released his seed into his master's velvety mouth.

Obi-Wan lay insensible against the wall of the shower, breathing hard, his entire body flushed and shaking uncontrollably. He closed his eyes and sighed weakly as his master rose against him to take his mouth in a thorough claiming kiss.

Qui-Gon shut off the flow of water and lifted his boneless padawan delicately, taking care not to slip on the careless splashes of stray water from the afternoon spent in the shower. Obi-Wan moaned against his master as he was deposited on his master's bed. The thrill of lying in Qui-Gon's bed threatened to bring him to arousal again, until he heard his master's words.

"Now, Obi-Wan, we need to talk..."