by Lyta Alexander, a.k.a. The Pink Padawan
(pinkpadawan@yahoo.com)
Archive: NC-17 version on M/A, nonslash PG-13 version at the
Qui-Gon Jinn Discussion List Homepage
Category: Plot-What-Plot (my own category would be "Training
Story"), S/M (sort of...), Romance (implicit here!)
Rating: NC-17
Warning: A bit of rough stuff, but it's all in the name of good
training!
Spoilers: None
Summary: Qui-Gon teaches some unorthodox combat techniques to a
class of initiates using rope. Obi-Wan gets his lessons
later.... Set before TPM-- Obi-Wan is 20.
Feedback: Yes, please! This is my first piece of Q/O slash I've
allowed to see the light of day, so I'm aching to know if it's
any good!
Disclaimer: Although I am tying George Lucas' characters in
knots, I promise I will not set them out at yard sales with
price tags attached. In other words, there ain't no way I'm
making any money off this little labor of love, so don't sue
me! Notes: //marks Obi-Wan's thoughts//, while *marks Qui-Gon's
thoughts*
It was very early morning, and Qui-Gon stood before the large
sliding door which led to the balcony of the quarters he and
his apprentice Obi-Wan Kenobi shared in the Jedi Temple. The
young orange Coruscant sun filtered minimally through the
treated transparisteel...the glow intensified as Qui-Gon slowly
turned a small dial on the wall next to the window. The warm
light illuminated the Jedi Master's wakeful face, uncovering
the depth of his sharp blue eyes, which turned back to gaze at
his stirring Padawan.
A muffled groan and lazy movement issued from the bed, as the
unaccustomed glare reached Obi-Wan Kenobi's tightly wrapped
form. Qui- Gon stopped his manipulation of the brightness knob
on the wall and walked to stand beside his Padawan's bedside.
"Up now, Obi-Wan. We have a lot to do today." Qui-Gon allowed
his voice to sound somewhat drowsy, but insistent. Obi-Wan
struggled to a sitting position and squinted up at his master.
"Yes, Maaahhhster" It was more a yawn than real speech. He
executed a slow side roll, which brought him to a standing
position in front of his Master. His eyes adjusted slowly and
Qui-Gon's face came into view. As Obi-Wan focused on his
Master's face, he realized that his Master also was intensely
focused on him.
Qui-Gon's eyes traveled purposefully down his Padawan's naked
form, sparkling appreciatively as he saw Obi-Wan realize what
was happening. The Padawan blushed slightly and sat down on the
bed, his gaze still fixed on his Master. He gasped slightly as
Qui-Gon reached down and grabbed his shoulders gently.
Qui-Gon's smile spread to the rest of his face as he lifted his
Padawan by the shoulders and maneuvered him purposefully to the
dresser, where a fresh set of training clothes lay, ready for
habitation by one Obi- Wan Kenobi.
"I can see I awoke you from a particularly interesting dream,
young Padawan, but your training comes first, as all Jedi
know." Qui-Gon was almost laughing now, but he restrained
himself to allow Obi-Wan to regain his senses without undue
confusion. His Padawan was pawing at his hands and rubbing his
freshly awakened young body against Qui-Gon's tunics like a
sandfrog in heat.
"Obi-Wan! Training time!" Qui-Gon couldn't keep the huskiness
of desire from creeping into his voice now, but his purpose
remained strong. He backed away from his rutting Padawan and
held out a pair of pants.
"I think you need a meditation period this morning, Padawan.
Something to get your priorities straight. Now, Jedi Padawan
Kenobi, kneel!" Qui-Gon's voice had swiftly fallen into a
barking rhythm and Obi-Wan promptly dropped the pair of pants
from his hand.
He dropped to his knees where he was, sitting naked with his
once neatly stacked clothing surrounding him in disarray. His
eyes closed automatically, his body fell into the natural
stance of long practice, kneeling with straight back, hands
cupped in front, right over left. The flush faded from his face
and body as his breathing evened out...
An unknown time later...
The shallow dark world faded abruptly from Obi-Wan Kenobi's
mind with the words of his Master, " Obi-Wan, you will get
dressed and you will meet me in the gardens in 30 minutes. You
will bring a 9 foot length of rope, looped by about a foot at
one end. You will bring yourself and your lightsaber. Make sure
you are well-groomed. I won't have a sloppy Padawan at training
today."
Obi-Wan opened his eyes and rose, immediately heading for the
'fresher. //Why did he emphasize "well-groomed"?// The thought
faded and he proceeded to shower off the dreams of the night.
The sun shone evenly into the high windows of the Jedi Temple
Gardens. It was now midmorning, and there were small gatherings
of Jedi at their devotionals in various copses of greenery. The
clearing near the large fountain was fairly teeming with a
class of older initiates between 10-12 standard years of age.
They gathered in a circle, which began to clear now, revealing
the towering form of his Master.
Obi-Wan suddenly knew why he had asked for a well-groomed
Padawan. These initiates were quite impressionable, and if they
were asked to defer to a sloppy Jedi Knight or Padawan, their
keen minds would question everything--"why does your Master
allow you to wear your braid that way? Why are your tunics
wrinkled? Who cuts your hair?" These were questions a Padawan
would find tiresome, but an initiate is so focused on becoming
a Padawan that he is intensely aware of the fine features of
every Padawan he came into contact with.
Apparently Qui-Gon meant to have Obi-Wan instruct this class of
initiates alongside him today. The thought did not comfort
Obi-Wan in the slightest. He liked to be prepared, but he knew
this was a lesson for him as well. //Swallow your apprehension
and get on with it, Obi-Wan...//
He strode forward into the shuffling mass of initiates, making
his way to his Master. A questioning look was all it took, and
Qui-Gon spoke readily. "Ah, Padawan, you're here. You will be
assisting me in a demonstration this morning. Master Yoda has
requested that I show his class some unorthodox fighting
techniques," Qui-Gon glanced at the rope in his Padawan's hand,
"thus the unorthodox weapon."
Obi-Wan handed the rope off to Qui-Gon and proceeded to play
the part of discipline officer, clapping his hands twice and
barking formation orders, "Form into lines, initiates. Be
mindful and give Master Qui-Gon your full attention." Obi-Wan
made a circuit of the class and returned to stand next to his
Master.
Qui-Gon quietly began. "Good morning initiates. I am Master
Qui-Gon Jinn, and this is my Padawan, Obi-Wan Kenobi. Master
Yoda has asked us to instruct you this morning in some fighting
techniques which you are probably not accustomed to seeing in
your everyday training." The initiates' eyes were all fixed on
Qui-Gon, who now held the rope stretched in front of him, the
loop hanging down from his left hand.
"Today, you will learn some creative ways to immobilize an
attacker using only a looped piece of rope. You might recognize
this type of rope, as it is commonly used around the Temple and
is thus freely available. You might find yourself in the
position one day of having nothing else with which to defend
yourself." Qui- Gon squared off with his Padawan.
"My Padawan will attack me with a full speed punch to the face.
I will defend using the rope. Obi-Wan..." Qui-Gon looked to his
Padawan.
With the signal, Obi-Wan launched a normal full speed punch at
his Master's head. Qui-Gon knocked it away, but draped the loop
over the offending arm, quickly pulling the free end through
the loop and around Obi-Wan's non-punching arm. Qui-Gon raised,
then lowered his body, pulling the rope with him until he was
behind Obi-Wan.
The Padawan was hopelessly tied, both arms locked and trussed
behind his back. Qui-Gon pulled tighter and looped the thus
liberated end of the rope around Obi- Wan's neck. He pulled
until a small tapping issued from Obi-Wan's booted foot. The
initiates gaped at the sight. Obi-Wan was pressed against the
floor, arms securely tied, back arched around Qui-Gon's knee,
his face turning red from the constriction of the rope around
his neck. And it had taken a total of 5 seconds.
"This is a dangerous technique for the untrained. Therefore,
you will not be allowed to practice this on each other...only
on me or my Padawan. To illustrate, just look at how quickly I
could have choked the life out of my Padawan. One must be
careful when using these techniques in practice. " A slight
gasp issued from Obi-Wan as Qui-Gon finally released his
control. The initiates stared as Obi-Wan untied himself with
ease, maintaining possession of the rope afterwards.
"This technique requires creativity and the implicit
understanding of empty hand techniques, as they are the basics
of mastering your own body's flow of energy. The rope is merely
an extension of your body, just like a lightsaber or any other
weapon. And it doesn't necessarily require strength, just good
mechanics. My Padawan will now demonstrate on me."
Obi-Wan struggled to remember the last time he and his Master
had practiced rope techniques, and couldn't bring an image to
mind. //Just trust the Force and do what you always do...//
*Live in the moment and it will come back to you, my Padawan*
Qui-Gon sent reassurance across their bond as he squared up to
Obi-Wan.
The punch came quickly, and Obi-Wan struck it with the end of
the rope, pulling it through the loop on the other side as he
stepped around Qui-Gon, tying his arms together as he went.
Obi-Wan dropped his weight and Qui-Gon fell like a sack of
Alderaanian Chocolate Oranges to the grassy ground. Obi-Wan
pulled his Master's arms over his head and looped the rope
again, this time around his legs. He tied the rope securely in
a tight knot for effect.
The Master lay unceremoniously facedown with his arms and legs
tied together, and yet he managed to sound dignified. "Some of
you will have enough discipline with the Force by now to use it
to untie yourselves from even such a well- executed trussing as
this one. " He looked sidewise and caught the eyes of a young
blonde girl, who looked into him with piercing green eyes. She
was intensely aware, as were those around her. The initiates
were enjoying the show, but they were picking it apart for
lessons they could take away with them.
They watched as the ropes, which were tight enough to bend
Qui-Gon's back into a quite uncomfortable looking arc, fell
away as nothing. The young blonde girl spoke first. "Master
Qui-Gon, what do you do if you can't get it tied?"
"It is not always necessary to tie the rope. It is enough to
wrap the rope around the assailant just tightly enough to pin
the arms or legs to his body so he can't fight you. It gives
you enough time to get away, find a better weapon or employ
Force-techniques. Come, try it on Obi-Wan. " The small girl
rose and squared up to the much larger Obi-Wan. She didn't even
wait for him to attack, but threw the rope gleefully around
Obi-Wan's neck and pulled on it. Inexperienced as she was, the
move allowed her to lower Obi-Wan to her level so she could
finish the job.
Every initiate was given a turn, and by the end of the class
two hours later, both Master and Padawan were criss-crossed
with rope burns. They dismissed the class to midday meal and
trudged back to their quarters to shower. The morning spent
tied in knots seemed to have tied their tongues in knots.
Neither Master nor Padawan spoke as they walked along.
Upon reaching their quarters, Obi-Wan proceeded to stretch
himself out as widely as possible on the bed, as if to throw
off the rope that was now sliding to the floor from his weary
grasp. Ten initiates had roped him; ten had roped his Master.
Several times each. No wonder Yoda didn't want to teach this
class...Obi-Wan had heard that it was traditionally taught by a
visiting Master. Perhaps Qui-Gon had merely drawn the unlucky
lot this semester. He found his thoughts drifting away, felt
weight upon him....
Qui-Gon looked calmly down at his bleary Padawan and spoke.
"Well, Padawan, what lesson did you learn?"
Obi-Wan opened his eyes and focused on his Master's inquiring
eyes, which bored into him from straight above. He languidly
pushed his hips into the comfortable weight of his Master
bearing down on him. A small smile reached the corners of his
mouth and he breathed out, unable to find his thoughts.
Qui-Gon pulled away slightly and met his Padawan's eyes. He
cleared his throat quietly, "Lesson, Padawan. Focus and tell
me." Qui-Gon's indigo stare was not brooking any delays or
wanderings.
//Lessons...focus...patience...definitely patience.// "Master,
I noticed many of the initiates attempting to copy yours or my
exact techniques. But it failed for some and worked for others.
The technique is individual...like a Padawan's training is
individual. No two are the same in the Force." He rippled his
tired shoulder and chest muscles enticingly, trying to make
contact with his burningly close Master's body.
No reaction. "You already knew that, Padawan. Did you learn
nothing new?"
"I didn't know I could still do those techniques. I thought I
had forgotten them, but I had not."
"I imagine you HAD forgotten them, Padawan. You found the flow
of the fight. It is an old lesson, but one that needs to be
remembered explicitly occasionally, even by an advanced
Padawan. Very good."
Qui-Gon's expression softened and he lowered himself slowly
into the range of his questing Padawan, who quickly pulled him
down into a deep kiss full of the hunger he remembered from the
morning's awakening. The Master's long locks fell forward as
his face met Obi-Wan's. Obi-Wan's eyes closed, and he was
engulfed in the singular closeness of his Master's mouth, his
intense darkened eyes that saw through to his very soul.
Abandoned to the sensuality of the moment, Obi-Wan did not feel
a slight shifting in his Master's weight...
He felt a slight tingle as the Force gathered around him; then
it happened. A tightness engulfed him; the ropes he had dropped
on the floor were suddenly looping around his wrists and
ankles. It all happened in less than a second. Obi-Wan pitched
forward face-first, as his arms and legs were drawn sharply
together behind him. Qui-Gon did not break contact with his
Padawan's lips until the final motion.
Obi-Wan's eyes opened in sudden shock, but it did not last
long. He could see what the lesson must be here. He held the
ropes as he found them, using tendrils of Force to trace their
lines of movement. He began to untangle the snaked ropes
calmly, as he had done during the demonstration. Through his
concentration, he could feel Qui-Gon's hands on him, pulling at
his focus, arousing him beyond his preparation.
Obi-Wan gasped aloud as Qui-Gon's touch moved down and caressed
him through his pants, teasing him to aching hardness. He
opened his eyes and noticed that Qui- Gon wasn't there at all.
He stood above him, several feet away, calmly watching,
directing the Force into every vulnerable area Obi-Wan had.
Obi-Wan raised his head off the bed and furrowed his brow at
his Master, who stood straight and expressionless in beside
him. His eyes had closed. His breathing was imperceptible.
Obi-Wan breathed heavily, then deepened and regularized his own
breathing rhythm, allowing himself to mix with the same Force
that held his firm member straining against his clothing,
moving with it. The spaces opened and he saw Qui-Gon there,
stroking him with the patterns of Force that swirled about him.
Obi-Wan touched those waves and found the ones that held the
ropes. He worked the Force tendrils loose slowly...
The ropes only became tighter. The arch in his back increased,
and he grunted at the pain caused by the contortion. //Slow
your breathing...trace the knots...//
Obi-Wan was doing everything he had learned, but nothing would
loosen the ropes. He strained his neck to catch a glimpse of
Qui-Gon, perhaps to divine what he had done to him, but Qui-Gon
did not appear to even be concentrating now. He was sitting
perfectly naked in the large chair facing the bed relaxing and
watching bemusedly. His muscles were sheened with a light layer
of sweat; he was visibly aroused, but unmoving.
The sight rocked Obi-Wan's concentration once more. He was
being stroked everywhere now; his penis held his pants away
from his body with its incredible state of arousal;
Force-fingers plunged mercilessly into his flexed buttocks,
caressing his prostate in an almost painful way, as his back
was severely arched by the cutting ropes.
He was close to release now, even through the pain of the
ever-tightening ropes. He struggled to keep his breathing
regular, to maintain his focus, as the waves of wildly tingling
sensation rose and fell at shorter intervals, threatening to
overwhelm Obi-Wan in their inexorable current.
Qui-Gon rose to stand next to Obi-Wan, who was unnaturally bent
and heaving his entire body in slow rhythm. "There IS a lesson
here, Padawan. You must find it. You will find it, because I
will not allow you to come until you do."
Obi-Wan's head jerked up to fix a stare on his Master; his
mouth opened incredulously. Slowing his short gasps, he grasped
for the lesson, feeling anger rise, slowly, then frustration as
ropes shrank into him. His breathing quickened, and he heard
himself whimper. //That's not right...// The fingers of the
Force continued their silent assault on Obi-Wan's overtaxed
body, directed by the will of Qui-Gon Jinn, who stood awaiting
his Padawan's breakthrough.
He reached out for the bond he shared with his Master. How
could Qui-Gon be doing this? But he sensed no disturbance
coming from Qui-Gon, save the familiar Force-tickling they
often shared during their lovemaking. That tickling was now an
agony. He had felt himself fall over the edge to certain orgasm
some time ago, but he was being held back, his body shaking
uncontrollably as it was slowly overloaded.
Obi-Wan's face had flushed red; his body was covered in sweat
that ran off him, sinking into the sheets beneath him. His
Padawan braid was matted across his face, clenched hard in his
teeth. Obi-Wan looked up again with difficulty. His Master was
now sitting in the chair, reading the latest issue of the
Coruscant Senate Review and munching on a Pralla fruit.
Obi-Wan felt himself beginning to chuckle, despite the pain of
the ropes, which never ceased their inexorable tightening,
despite his spasming sexual organs which would not yield their
release, yet pushed him beyond it. The sheer absurdity of the
situation: he, tied up beyond his capability to extract
himself, shaking life a leaf in a hurricane, Qui-Gon reading a
banal publication, munching fruit and watching him like it was
a sporting event...
Obi-Wan's chuckling became a high-pitched keening laugh, a
hysterical sounding animal noise, which came in waves from the
struggling Padawan. He was sweating profusely now, gasping with
fits of laughter, which would not stop.
Qui-Gon looked up momentarily. "Stop struggling, Padawan, and
you will get it." He calmly buried his face in the banal
publication once more, leaving Obi-Wan to unravel the lesson.
The laughing abruptly stopped as Obi-Wan felt his feet touch
his head and realized just how tangled he really was. A glimmer
of fear touched him. He swallowed hard, caught his galloping
breath and turned it around.
//What is wrong with me? I'm a Jedi. I lost my calm so
quickly.//
Obi-Wan closed his eyes, slowed his breathing. He breathed in
the intense pain which stabbed through his limbs, let it pass
through him. His mind detached itself from his violently
shaking body, poised as it was beyond the brink. He drew the
Force around him into himself, not looking for the ropes or
anything this time. Then he could see. A hard knot inside him,
at his very center. The Force flowed through it and proceeded
in a twisted path from it. He caught one swirling tendril and
followed it in. There, he knew why he could not escape.
He was tied from within...the Force had knotted within Obi-Wan;
Obi-Wan was, in effect, tying himself up. The realization shot
through him; recognition shattered the hard crystal of
resistance and the knots slid off him. His body uncurled and
flopped like a fish on dry land. The mind met the body once
again, and the current caught in him, spasms ran through his
body, releasing the orgasmic reflex, shooting it through him
and out.
His mouth opened as he swallowed the air, screaming
involuntarily as heavy waves carried him under. Eyes closed,
breaths fast and ragged now, he sloughed the knot, casting the
ropes of Force from him. Warmth spread through him, spread
across his groin, through his abdomen, arms, legs. Sharp pains
of unaccustomed freedom lanced through him as well, and he
stretched his shaking body, collapsed in exhaustion.
Qui-Gon, who had watched it all silently, tossed the magazine
away as if it had offended him and moved to sit on the bed
beside his Padawan. He allowed Obi-Wan to overcome the rush of
sharp spasms which ran through him as he slowly sat up and
stretched himself.
"What did you learn, Padawan?"
Obi-Wan swore there was a note of amusement in his otherwise
impassive Master's voice. "I...untied myself, not the ropes,
Master." His breath had slowed but was still short and gasping,
"I don't understand it, but there was a knot inside me, and I
could not escape until I broke it."
"Understanding is not necessary. What you felt was a trick that
advanced Force- users can use against opponents who may or may
not be strong in the Force. I tied you up physically and held
you momentarily using the Force in a straightforward way. But
then, I pulled it into a "twist" of sorts inside you and left
you that way. It caused you to fight yourself until you found
the knot I had made."
Obi-Wan's eyes came into sharp focus on his Master.
"Master, I know the lesson now. The techniques are individual,
not just in the body, but in the manipulation and presence in
the Force. I cannot let myself become too lazy in my
relationship with the Force. It is a living thing and is
ever-changing."
"Good, Obi-Wan. You, like the rope, must be a flexible weapon.
Even you, my Padawan, tend to fall into familiar patterns which
can be predicted. You must learn to rely on the Force, not the
techniques you have practiced. Once you learn the technique,
you will be able to throw it away, retaining only its essence.
Then, you have truly mastered the art you practice."
"Yes, Master. I suppose the deft use of your Force-fingers was
but a distraction?" Obi-Wan smiled wryly at his Master, who now
eased him back onto the bed, pressing his rock-hard cock
directly into Obi-Wan's stomach.
"That was merely a warm-up exercise, Padawan. Now to the actual
workout." Qui- Gon smiled indulgently at his obviously worn-out
apprentice, who lay unmoving under him, eyes closing. Qui-Gon
deftly peeled Obi-Wan's dampened clothing from his equally damp
body.
A sharp yelp and definite stirring proceeded from the startled
Padawan, as Qui- Gon reached his actual flesh fingers under him
and spread a tingling lubricant across his cleft. This was
followed by the sweet invasion of Qui-Gon's long digits into
him.
A wide smile spread across Obi-Wan's sleepy features as he
opened to his Master's physical caresses. Qui-Gon's face was
bent close to Obi-Wan's, an intense gaze rested on his Padawan.
The Jedi Master focused on the object of his love...his
attention was total.
"You know I couldn't have sat there and been unaffected by what
I had seen. You were beautiful, my Obi-Wan. Even in your
struggling. I am always touched deeply to see you grasp a
difficult lesson, to watch you flowering, becoming a Jedi,
feeling and understanding the Force by my side."
Qui-Gon rubbed himself against Obi-Wan's languid body, working
his hands into Obi-Wan's tight muscles, relaxing him. Slowly,
he raised Obi-Wan's legs, kneading his corded thigh muscles,
positioning himself between them, resting them on his strong
shoulders.
Obi-Wan groaned as his muscles unknotted and his arousal grew
strong once more. "I love you, my Master. But don't do that to
me again!" Obi-Wan's wry smile had a touch of utter seriousness
in it. The lesson was a painful one. To bind one who is adept
in the Force by such a method was dangerous if the student had
not learned sufficient control and focus. Obi-Wan excelled most
others in this area, and found the answer relatively quickly.
Qui-Gon returned a soft contemplative smile, "My love, I would
not put you through something I didn't know you could take. You
are extraordinary." He slowly pushed inside Obi-Wan's body,
feeling tightness engulf him, feeling the essence of his
Padawan, that which had been shaped through years of training
and years of love. Love was the key.
Obi-Wan surrounded him, touched him inside, beyond where the
tendrils of Force could go. Deep inside the sea of his own
personality, deep inside what was Qui- Gon, lay the essence of
Obi-Wan Kenobi, even as Obi-Wan was the sea that surrounded
him.
Obi-Wan opened to his Master, feeling their bond, feeling his
Master inside him. The rhythm sank into him, pouring itself
between the Jedi. Suddenly, Qui-Gon turned him over, pressing
himself farther inside, wrapping his arms tightly around
Obi-Wan's abdomen, pulling him close in.
Qui-Gon pumped harder and buried his mouth in Obi-Wan's neck,
drinking in his scent, bathing in it. His large hands encircled
Obi-Wan's hardened member and pumped it in his own inexorable
rhythm. Master and Padawan heaved together and fell into orgasm
together. Qui-Gon collapsed against his Padawan's warm sweat-
sheened back, gasping silently. His breaths swept Obi-Wan's
short hair like the wind in a field of young grain.
Obi-Wan had closed his eyes and was slowly sinking to the bed,
allowing Qui- Gon's weight to push him down. His Master was
still inside him, pulsing in small spasms that caused Obi-Wan
to moan softly as he sank into unconsciousness.
Suddenly, he was being hauled up unceremoniously. Qui-Gon held
him upright and was dragging him to the 'fresher. "I love you
more than the sky and stars, Obi- Wan, but you can't sleep
until you shower."
Obi-Wan came to his senses long enough to step into the warm
stream of the shower stall and feel Qui-Gon's lather-rich hands
working across his back, along his arms. He turned to find
Qui-Gon's eyes focused; he was absorbed with his task, giving
it his full attention.