Paddlewan

by FireCracker Klee624820@aol.com



submission dated 9-25-99

Pairing Q/O

A/U - Plot What Plot

Naturally, Obi's twenty-three.

Qui-Gon attacks from the rear.



It was one of the rare arguments they had. Obi-Wan had been involved in a particularly rough training session, and Qui-Gon had been critical of his lack of concentration. During the exercises he had lowered his guard and repeatedly dropped his lightsaber.

"Do you ever give me credit for effort, at least?" the young Jedi was exasperated. "I did the best I could!"

Qui-Gon folded his arms sternly. "If such is the case then, in combat situations you just might find yourself decapitated. This isn't the first time you've had a lapse, Obi-Wan."

Obi-Wan turned away. I'm distracted, all right. I've got the hots for the finest Master on Coruscant.

"It's not that serious. It won't happen again." Defensive.

Qui-Gon softened, touching his arm. "Padawan, I don't mean to be harsh. It's just that...I know what you're capable of. Is it something I can help you with?"

Obi-Wan looked into the deep blue eyes, laced with concern. His throat went dry.

"I...I don't know if it's a training problem."

Qui-Gon drew him closer. "What, then. Personal?"

He nodded.

"Come. Let's continue this in the living room."

They went into their living area quarters. Qui-Gon sat on the couch, pulling Obi-Wan alongside.

A large hand touched his cheek. "Now tell me. What is it that distracts you so?"

Do I tell the truth or give him a 'proper' answer? Obi-Wan debated.

Qui-Gon observed him. Force, he is beautiful. If the Council knew my desires they would surely lock me away.

Obi-Wan coughed nervously. The emerald eyes were bright.

"I guess the best way is to just say it. I...haven't had my mind on everyday matters for some time."

"Your focus is somewhere else?"

The high cheekbones flushed. "Not exactly. You might say I'm out of focus" don't cop out now, Obi-Wan!

Qui-Gon reached out, massaging his hand gently. "You can tell me anything. Trust me."

The younger Jedi was encouraged. "There's someone I am in love with. Someone that I want so much, I can't think straight."

The blue eyes darkened. "Sounds like a dilemma. Does this person return your feelings?"

Obi-Wan stared into his eyes. "I hope so with all my heart. I've wanted us to be together for so long."

"Is this someone on Coruscant? Another padawan?"

Obi-Wan shook his head slowly, continuing his intense gaze. He leaned forward a little.

"No" he breathed. "Far more than that. Someone I would love forever. Someone with whom I would share my body and soul."

Qui-Gon was nearly lost. The shimmering spiky hair, brilliant green eyes and sensuous lips. Cheekbones to kill for. Soft, golden skin. And a body he could gladly ravage any day of the week.

Fool! Control, lest you lose everything!

He swallowed. "I am...certain you will resolve this. Your love is fortunate indeed" he stood abruptly.

"Let's eat dinner. Perhaps a good meal will help. In the meantime Obi-Wan, don't worry overmuch. If your beloved feels the same way, you will know."

The young man stared up at him. What's he trying to tell me?? his heart thumped with hope.

A big hand drew him up. "Come on, stop moping. You need to eat" Qui-Gon smiled softly.




Their dinner was quite good. Malari steaks with mixed rice and boogrq vegetables in season. Qui-Gon even felt mellow enough to break out Sheelth Wine.

They laughed and joked as their warmth and companionship locked into a comfort zone.

"I must apologize Master. My earlier outburst no doubt seemed a bit...sappy."

The impossibly intense gaze fixed him. "On the contrary" the deep voice rumbled. "I found it most endearing."

Obi-Wan stared in silence, taking in the handsome features and night blue eyes. The olive toned rock solid body he knew existed under yards of fabric. The impossible mane of hair, bound tightly into a horsetail down his back.

When's the last time I saw him out of those drab robes?

Realizing he was staring, Obi-Wan quickly looked down at his plate.

Qui-Gon smiled slowly. I have plans for this luscious fruit. Patience, you will be rewarded beyond your wildest dreams.

Later they watched a movie on their home viewscreen.

After it was over, Qui-Gon got up and reached for his cloak and cowl. "Obi-Wan, I'm going to the dispensary. I'll be back in about an hour or so" he eyed the younger man critically. "You need rest, padawan."

Obi-Wan rubbed his eyes sleepily. "Guess you're right. It's been a looong day."

Qui-Gon smiled to himself as he headed for the door. And it's going to be an even longer night.




Obi-Wan had bathed and put on a thick robe. He crawled into bed.

Just what I needed, he thought. But his body ached badly. He looked down at a bulging erection.

Should've made it a cold shower instead.

He massaged the bulge. "Ghods, this thing hurts. Want him so bad..."

He began to fantasize. Closing his eyes, he formed a mental picture.

Qui-Gon kissing him in all his sensitive places, pulling off his clothes. Hot breath on the tip of his cock. The powerful throat taking him in deeply. Thickly muscled arms crushing him in an embrace.

He pulled himself faster and faster, bouncing the bed. "Force!!" he shouted, eyes snapping open. His hand was gooey with cum. He waited a few moments for his breathing to calm.

I'd better change before Qui-Gon gets back.

Sighing, he padded toward the bathroom.






Qui-Gon returned home with his package.

All the lights were out. My padawan must be asleep.

He peeked in the bedroom. Obi-Wan was out, sprawled on the bed wearing a towel. He smiled at the sight. The bronzed body gleamed in the moonlight.

Delicious. I must hurry. He went into the bathroom.

A taut erection pushed against his Jedi robe. Impatiently he removed the offending material, dropping it to the floor. He opened his package.

Let's see how you like this, padawan.

He pulled out a cutaway latex body suit. Qui-Gon held it up to the sink mirror. He grinned wickedly.

Peekaboo, Obi-Wan, I see you.

He stretched the material over his muscled form. The bodysuit fit like a shiny black spiderweb. It showed a great deal of flesh.

Especially in the front. He pulled his cock through the front opening.

Nice, if I do say so myself Qui-Gon allowed, viewing himself in the mirror. His nipples poked out underneath a cross body strap on his chest. Black calf boots completed the ensemble. He unbraided his hair, letting it tumble freely down his back.

With a predatory smile, he headed for the bedroom.








Obi-Wan slept a quiet, dreamless sleep. But his body felt warm. Too warm. He tried to move, but was restrained. How?

Shifting, sliding warmth. Stinging pain. A pleasant ache. Sting.

His eyes opened slowly, groggily. Heat rolled in his groin.

A slap, loud this time. He jolted, awake now.

"Whuu. Master?!" his eyes widened in shock.

Qui-Gon sat alongside the bed in that...outfit. Obi-Wan sat up, staring.

Ghods. Is this the same Qui-Gon I saw earlier today?

"You are surprised?" faint smile.

Obi-Wan couldn't take his eyes off the sight. The fantasies he'd had about that body...

Couldn't touch the real thing.

"Master" he breathed in disbelief. "How do you come here like this. I never knew that you...had this side to you."

Qui-Gon lay back, sensuously. "It is no 'side', padawan. I love you. I want you. And by the stars, I will have you tonight!"

Pulse racing, the younger Jedi roamed his eyes over the big body. "Are you saying that, that..." he reached out tentatively.

Qui-Gon grabbed his hand, guiding it over his body. "Touch me everywhere, my love. Long have I waited for this."

Sculpted hands ran over the silky skin, fingers sliding under the latex webs. "Oh ghods, Master. You're perfect. Beautiful."

Qui-Gon threw his head back, hair tumbling about the bed. "Hardly perfect, Obi-Wan" he smiled nonetheless.

Heat danced in his groin. Obi-Wan reached for Qui-Gon's head, grabbing handfuls of hair. He pulled the fine face forward, pressed lips.

/I disagree, Qui-Gon. You are fine as hell, and built like a shid brickhouse. I love you, so much./

The kiss was long, hot, and wet. Qui-Gon groaned, grabbing at Obi-Wan's towel, yanking it off. He pulled Obi-Wan on top, stroked the damp hips, massaging the lush backside. Obi-Wan panted, rubbing his body against Qui-Gon's. His tongue teased the thick nipples out from underneath a latex chest strap, tasting the sweet tang of olive skin. Qui-Gon grit his teeth in pleasure, closing his eyes.

Tight erections rubbed between sweat slicked bodies. Obi-Wan's cock slipped inside Qui-Gon's latex webbing, stroking against bellies as their bodies slid together. The sensations drove him insane. They pulled slowly out of the sweltering kiss. Lips stuck together as Qui-Gon spoke, holding his lover's face against his own.

"Obi-Wan" he breathed roughly. "Do as I say this night and my pleasure shall be yours."

Obi-Wan's eyes were nearly closed. "I want what you want" he whispered.

Another smacking, loud kiss. Qui-Gon slapped the plump buttocks.

"Stand up" he growled. "Face the wall."

Obi-Wan sighed softly, sliding off the bed. Qui-Gon held him from behind, stroking the smooth chest and thighs. Leaning forward, he pecked kisses along the golden neck and shoulders.

//You are so beautiful, Obi-Wan. I can barely control myself.//

His padawan leaned back, face flushed. /I've wanted you...for so long, Qui-Gon.../

The broad hands slapped his thighs.

"Uuhh" Obi-Wan gasped at the stinging sensations. His balls twitched.

Qui-Gon pushed him up against the wall, rubbing his thick shaft between Obi-Wan's crevice. Slowly, tortuously, sliding hips side to side. Obi-Wan groaned loudly. Qui-Gon lifted Obi-Wan's hands high up over his head, holding them against the wall with force cuffs. He stood back, observing the sight.

"Yesss" he approved, licking his lips. "Now you are mine."

Obi-Wan attempted to turn around. "Qui-Gon" he rasped, green eyes glowing.

Qui-Gon slapped his ass. Hard. "Did I tell you to turn around?" more slaps, stinging the lush buttocks.

Obi-Wan quivered with delight. "Aah. no, Master..."

Qui-Gon continued his assault, slapping both cheeks mercilessly. Obi-Wan arched up, panting. "Ggghh!"

Then he leaned forward, biting along the bronzed back and shoulder blades. Obi-Wan gasped as the short beard tickled along his skin while hard teeth stabbed fire.

Long tongue snaking down his back, across his hips, wetting a trail.

"Nnnmm. Sweet. Like...mm...honey" nails raked along golden thighs.

Obi-Wan started to twitch. "Guh, Qui-Gon, please..." his balls were getting tight.

Sliding lower, Qui-Gon ran his tongue down the crack, slipping it inside the puckered opening.

"Sith!!" Obi-Wan cursed, grimacing with delight. His hips yanked up.

Hair hanging down in a curtain to the floor, Qui-Gon reached underneath his lover's crotch, even as the wet tongue slithered up further.

A rough hand slapped Obi-Wan's balls rapidly. Qui-Gon withdrew his tongue, nearly making his padawan come. He was almost there himself, sweating, thick cock swaying heavily over the floor.

"Now, I want it now!!" Obi-Wan shouted in pleasure. His erection pointed at the wall.

Grunting, Qui-Gon continued to slap his balls. Then his cock. Back and forth. //Burst...together//

Clenching and jerking, nearly crying out, Obi-Wan arched his back. He was leaking now.

Quick kiss licks on his ass, nip and bite. The cheeks were red now. Nips on the back of luscious thighs. The wet tongue in the bend of his legs, behind the knees.

Obi-Wan felt something thick and heavy bump against his butt as Qui-Gon quickly stood up behind him. Heat and sweat were near his back. More ass slaps, almost painful now.

"Aaagh! Oh pleaseplease" he begged, moaning now, body throbbing with need. "This feels so good!" Obi-Wan reared back, wanting more. The heavy cock bounced off his butt.

Qui-Gon licked the back his neck. The curtain of hair fell over their shoulders. "I've got something that feels even better" he rasped roughly, plunging inside the plump ass.

Obi-Wan shrieked as the powerful body drove into him. Qui-Gon rode him hard, hammering the shaking buttocks. He was lifted, feet off the floor...

And riding high. Bouncing and heaving, happy and humping.

His eyes rolled as fire shot up his back, a sweet aching explosion.

"Yes! Dammit! Aaaaaaah....!"

Wracking with pleasure, he shot all over the wall.

Qui-Gon heaved, thick thighs banging, rough hands pinching Obi-Wan's fat nipples.

His back arched. "Tight...sweet....Gaaaaagh!" he shattered and broke, spilling thick cream down the bronzed thighs.

Obi-Wan wasn't sure if he blacked out or not. When he opened his eyes they were on the floor, wet and exhausted.

Qui-Gon looked at him lovingly, eyes half closed. Obi-Wan kissed the strong neck.

"Beautiful" the deep voice murmured.

The emerald eyes were brilliant. "May I return the compliment."

Qui-Gon looked up at the ceiling dazedly, mane tangled and everywhere. "How did we get on the floor? I don't remember..."

Giggling, Obi-Wan plopped on top of him. "If this is what it's going to be like, I hope I never remember how we end up on the floor!"

"Hmm" jet blue eyes regarded him, glowing. Qui-Gon crushed his padawan to his chest. "Did I mention that I love you?"

The handsome face flushed. "Remember your words to me before? " /If your beloved feels the same way you will know.../

Qui-Gon touched his face, eyes shining with emotion. //Oh, Obi-Wan...//

Obi-Wan nuzzled, smiling. " Shh. Let's take a bath. We're all sticky."

"It would be a waste of time" Qui-Gon was sly, brightening.

Startled. "Why!"

Teeth flashing a smile. "We'd just get sticky again" he said, quickly silencing Obi-Wan with another sloppy kiss.

Obi-Wan's eyes closed, blissful against the kiss. He was content. Oh well. One for the money, two for the show...



THE END



These boys need ice...