Loin

by Vermillion Flame (vermillion_flame@hotmail.com)



Series: Anatomy (also includes Toe, Knee, Navel, Baldpate, Finger, Elbow)

Archive: M_A - anybody else just ask.

Category: PWP

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: none

Feedback: Any and all, please - including constructive criticism!

Summary: Obi-Wan has discovered a particularly sensitive spot on Qui-Gon's back, and his attentions have driven his master to believe it is possible to have too much sex. Can Obi-Wan convince him otherwise?

Note: The Macmillan Visual Dictionary shows "loin" as that spot very low and in the middle of the back, just above the "posterior rugae." (You can look that one up yourself.)

Thanks, michelle, for your Useful Thoughts and body check on the boyz.



Qui-Gon stared out of the ship's viewport, almost hypnotized by the myriad flickering stars flying past. He wondered why so many life-forms went to the trouble of installing viewports in spaceships when they weren't at all necessary. One needn't see the stars to navigate through them. Perhaps it was a concession to the wanderlust that possessed so many creatures across the galaxies.

Although he himself certainly suffered from a compulsion to explore, that was not what brought Qui-Gon to his present position on the ship's forward deck. He was hiding from Obi-Wan. Well, maybe hiding was too strong a word. He had to admit, though, that he was at least *avoiding* his apprentice.

Having a youthful lover was, all in all, a wonderful experience for which he thanked the Force regularly. But in the past week, the Jedi Master's endurance had been tested to the limits. Obi-Wan had discovered a new sweet spot on his lover's body, and he was driving Qui-Gon mad with it.

Six days ago, Qui-Gon had been leaning, naked, against the wall of their common room. His head rested against his crossed arms while Obi-Wan kissed and licked his way down his back. The talented tongue had ultimately landed at the very base of Qui-Gon's spine, just above the crevice of his buttocks. The licking and sucking Obi-Wan proffered on that spot had sent Qui-Gon spiraling into a sudden, intense and unexpected orgasm, his shout registering surprise as he came all over the wall.

"Well! My goodness," Obi-Wan had commented wryly. Qui-Gon turned as he struggled to catch his breath, and caught a glimpse of a single raised eyebrow and a self-satisfied grin on the young man's face. He knew that his bright, skillful lover was busily making plans for exploitation of that particular spot.

It wasn't bad at first. Qui-Gon was accustomed to the advantages Obi-Wan took with his body, including the little assaults that occurred in somewhat public places. He could smile at the soft brush of the hand across his groin as they passed in the hallway. He tolerated the quick grope of his posterior as they exited the lift. At least Obi-Wan was discreet enough to keep the flicking tongue and teasing teeth to more private locales, even if they were given at inopportune moments.

He chalked up the latest addition to Obi-Wan's repertoire of fondling - rubbing his lower back through his tunics - as yet another example of his lover's youthful exuberance. That trifle had lasted a few days. But now, he was at Obi-Wan's mercy.

Through diligent practice, the padawan had managed to perfect a Force-touch to that precise area -- a Force-touch that perfectly mimicked a soft warm tongue. It left Qui-Gon gasping for breath. It left him a puddle of incoherent lust. Worst of all, it left him instantly hard, no matter where he was.

If he tried to be objective about the situation, Qui-Gon had to be impressed with his apprentice's skillful use of the Force. But as a Jedi Master, he was in trouble. He began to wonder if he had unknowingly been gifted with a tattoo that encouraged his lover to "lick here."

Obi-Wan had at least exercised some restraint by not using his trick in truly embarrassing situations, such as in the Council chambers. Most of the Temple, however, seemed to be fair game.

Qui-Gon was almost brought to his knees as they entered the dining hall and he felt the excruciatingly sensual touch to his loin. Walking down the Temple hallway with another master, he'd been forced to feign a dizzy spell as Obi-Wan made his presence known through a deft, warm swipe at the spot. Qui-Gon had hoped his shields were sufficient to disguise the overwhelming wave of desire that shot through him. He'd made excuses for himself and his apprentice, taken the young man back to their quarters, and barely waited for the door to close before attacking the oh-so-willing padawan.

Every time. Every time it affected him so. He dreaded it. He craved it.

Qui-Gon broke his gaze from the star-swept expanse of the viewport and looked down at his hands grasping the ornate gold railing. He cast a tentative query over the bond he shared with his lover, trying not to be noticed. Good. His apprentice was still meditating.

The master had left his padawan in their rooms aboard the lavish royal transport. They were en route to yet another planet on yet another mission. Both men had spent adequate time studying the files, brushing up on history, protocol and the subtleties of the local language. Now, they were left to their own devices for occupying the remaining days of their journey.

Obi-Wan made it plain what his preference was for passing the time.

They had spent hours indulging in each other's bodies. It was uncommon for the two men to have so much time to express their passion, and they both savored the opportunity. It was, however, getting to be exhausting. At least Qui-Gon thought so.

That evening as they had settled in for their usual meditation, Qui-Gon excused himself, pleading restlessness. And here he was, hiding.

He pondered the best course of action. He didn't want to seem unappreciative. The physical side of their relationship was just as important to him as it was to Obi-Wan. He just needed a respite from the intensity of it all.

He realized he'd better decide what to do quickly, because Obi-Wan had finished his meditation and was casting about for his master's location. Qui-Gon tried to quiet himself mentally, but he knew it was for naught. The bond he shared with his padawan was too strong to completely douse. Obi-Wan would find him soon.

He returned to his contemplation of the stars through the viewport, and was not surprised when he caught Obi-Wan's reflection in the smooth surface.

"Master, are you well?" The apprentice passed by the conference table and climbed the two stairs to the platform where Qui-Gon stood. He turned and leaned against the railing, looking up at his master. His thigh pressed against the taller man's leg.

"Yes, love. Perhaps a bit tired. I needed a few moments of solitude."

"Should I leave?" Obi-Wan asked hesitantly.

"No." Qui-Gon brushed the backs of his fingers across the padawan's cheek. "I need to speak to you."

"Yes, Master?" Obi-Wan's eyes returned Qui-Gon's gaze, but the touch to his cheek seemed to have given him ideas. His fingers were on the move, infiltrating the master's tunic.

Qui-Gon took a deep breath. "We have spent much of the last two days..." he began, but couldn't bring himself to finish the thought. How did one complain about too much sex? Especially when a lovely hand was snaking its way through his clothing to caress his skin.

Obi-Wan looked at his master expectantly.

"I am not as young as you are, Obi-Wan."

"Master! Not this again, please?" The tone was despairing. The hand was brushing against a nipple. Qui-Gon suppressed a quiver.

"No, no. It's just that ... the years take a certain toll on a man's body," Qui-Gon tried again to explain, but Obi-Wan had withdrawn his hand, and its absence rather distracted him. He didn't know whether to sigh with relief or frustration.

Then his utility belt fell to the floor.

Qui-Gon grasped the busy hands in his own. "Obi-Wan," he began sternly, but then made the critical mistake of looking into his lover's eyes. The apprehension apparent there took his breath away.

"Qui-Gon?" Obi-Wan's use of his given name revealed the depth of his concern.

"It's all right, Obi-Wan." He dropped a reassuring kiss onto the young man's forehead. "It's a matter of physiology. My body is simply not capable...."

A derisive snort interrupted his careful rationalization. The incredulity on Obi-Wan's face revealed his opinion of this particular proposal.

Hands were once again on the move. Qui-Gon's tunic hit the floor.

"I will show you what you are capable of, my Master." The silky, seductive tone was mesmerizing.

Obi-Wan slid around to Qui-Gon's back, leaning into the taller man. His hands reached around his master's waist, briefly caressed his chest and stomach, and then deftly untied his leggings. Qui-Gon caught the waistband before they fell.

"Obi-Wan! The pilot..."

"...is doing what pilots do," the padawan retorted, prying loose his master's grip.

"The copilot..."

"... is a droid," Obi-Wan disdained. His hands glided over Qui-Gon's hips, exposing more of his body.

"The door..."

"...is locked," came the answer, following a quick Force-laden motion.

Qui-Gon could find no further excuses as he finally gave into the wondrous seduction of his lover's lips moving over his back. He closed his eyes and relished the rough hands wandering over his body, teasing the soft skin on either side of his rapidly responding phallus.

"Oh, Obi-Wan." His lover's name, their passion, that amazing tongue - all of these combined into a cascade of lust that rolled through his body, stealing the strength from his legs. Qui-Gon sagged forward, resting his weight against the gold railing. Its support was the only thing that kept him from collapsing.

Qui-Gon opened his eyes to be confronted with an incredibly erotic tableau displayed in the viewport: his own reflection, and that of his lover. Qui-Gon saw his own lidded eyes displaying wanton need, his bare chest heaving with his arousal, his hips bent over the railing, his knuckles white with the tight grip he maintained, his leggings drooping over the tops of his boots.

He could not see much of Obi-Wan, just a bit of his form as he knelt behind him, and his hand moving to surround his erection. Qui-Gon moaned and thrust forward to meet the embrace as it reached his phallus.

He rocked then, finding decadent pleasure in both his forward and backward motions. The mouth. The hand. Again. Again.

Qui-Gon stared in fascination as he lost himself in the exquisite rhythm. The sight of his cock sliding through Obi-Wan's hand made him light-headed. He leaned further forward, resting his head and his palms against the cold transparency. The sensations were incredible, and he knew what was yet to come.

Finally, Obi-Wan moved to the spot. The tongue swept softly over his loin, offering only a quick tease, but Qui-Gon heard himself groan loudly in response. He sank a little further down onto the railing. He was utterly, totally lost to his lover's skill.

Obi-Wan evidently took the guttural moan as encouragement. He began to work the spot in earnest, licking, kissing and sucking. Qui-Gon was astounded by the degree of pleasure it provoked, so much that it was almost painful.

He breathed harshly, wanting to both prolong the building ecstasy, and reach the ultimate release. He tried to stop moving, but couldn't. His craving for his padawan's touch drove him on. It was too much. He thrust forward once more into his lover's fist and came, jetting all over his own reflection. His shout bounced off the viewport and reverberated around the room.

Qui-Gon collapsed onto the floor, and was quickly pulled into his lover's arms as the final waves of orgasm rolled through him. The tingling pleasure receded slowly, small aftershocks pulsing through his system as he relished the contact with his lover's body. At last he relaxed and sank his weight against Obi-Wan's chest.

"You were saying, Master?" Obi-Wan's ironic tone matched the smirk Qui-Gon saw in the smeared reflection of the viewport.

"You are proud of yourself, aren't you?" Qui-Gon asked in mock exasperation.

"It's not often that I have the opportunity to prove my Master wrong."

Qui-Gon let out a long sigh. "Just don't do it too often. I don't think I could stand it."

Obi-Wan smiled in reply, and gave his master a squeeze.

"And Padawan, *you* can clean the viewport."